The topic was: In chapter 3 we read about Foucault’s  vision of a disciplinary society, and his idea that schools, hospitals and the workplace function much like a prison using surveillance and a reward system to keep the individual adhering to accepted norms. Given your experience either as a student or a worker, define Foucault’s  disciplinary system and use that definition to argue why or how the education or the workplace functions as a disciplinary system. You should use your own experience as evidence but you should also use passages from the the reading.
Revise and expand. Re-envision your overall argument/thesis. Add more examples . Aim for greater coherence and detail. I’ve included the original paper that was written by you.