
Outline for Essay #2
I. Introduction
A. Hook: Can you believe that 4,000 adolescents commit suicide each year due to the rising number in cases of bullying!
B. Thesis: Do you think that cyber bullying is worse than physical bullying?
II. Body
A. Major Detail #1 Topic sentence (Cyber bullying disturbs the peace of mind of a person)
1. Anxiety/Depression
2. Sadness & Loneliness
3. Changes in Sleep & Eating Patterns
B. Major Detail #2 Topic sentence (Cyber bullying is bad for the health of the victims)
1. Stomach ulcers
2. Headaches
3.
C. Major Detail #3 Topic sentence (Cyberbullying can effect the victim academically)
1. Decreased academic achievement
2. Miss or Skip School
3. Drop out of school completely
III. Conclusion
A. Restate thesis (type here)
Do you think that cyber bullying is worse than physical bullying?
B. Summarize main points (type here)
Due to the long term mental and physical health issues that come with along with cyber bullying I believe that it is far worse then a one time physical assault. It brings depression, paranoia, anger, and embarrassment into the lives of its victims. Some people live with these affects for a lifetime and never recuperate and move on.
C. Closing thought (type here)
Over 4,000 children take their life’s each year in America over being cyber bullied. What would you do to protect your child? Awareness is key.