The language needs to be modified and the referencing needs to follow Harvard referencing style. The essay needs to be 3000 (up to 3300) words the bibliography does not count. Please ensure this is original as it will go through Turnitin. “You developed a clear narrative around the behaviour management strategies you observed during your professional practice in a school that serves numerous students under the Pupil Premium scheme. Writing and Communication You display a description of discipline and uniform approaches, widely missing an analytical language. also, the referencing is not consistent with the Harvard style. Knowledge and Understanding This essay displays a limited level of understanding of the selected practices as supporting diverse learners. Critically analysing their effectiveness for diverse learners would drastically improve the quality of this as​‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‌‍‍‌‌‌‍‍‍‍​signment. Evidence Base This essay shows a limited amount of research-based evidence to develop a critical analysis of the case. Argumentation The provisions in place for learners with SEND statements could have been developed in this essay to show the extent to which those practices actually support the needs of diverse learners. In order to meet the learning outcomes of this module, I would recommend restructuring the essay structure, by presenting the context, and then addressing the critical examination by integrating a wide range of literature to support your argument. I wish you well with your continuing studies. Dr. Xavi Gonzalez-Wegener Moderated by: Mathew Barnard” You should carefully consider the kinds of learners which you teach, identify the approaches to behaviour management, and the organisation of learning and inclusion in your practices and those of the school, and critically analyse the extent to which practices support the needs of your diverse learners.